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1/26/2017

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The Right Word

As a poet I look
through book after book
for just the right word -- to get it.

But if I can't find it,
I really don't mind it;
I file it away -- why sweat it?

For I know that in time
the correct word or rhyme
will ask to be heard and I'll let it.

Then I put up my feet
'cuz my poem is complete,
and the waiting? I never regret it.


First published in The SCBWI Bulletin, May 2011
reprinted in The Journal of Children's Literature, Spring 2014
(c) B.J. Lee 2011 All Rights Reserved


This poem may well have been called "Waiting For the Right Word" since creating a poem is generally a waiting process for me, requiring not only the right word, but the right metaphor, the right angle, the right form and the right voice, not necessarily in that order. Here are some of my considerations:

1. The right metaphor - Often this is the hardest, yet most crucial part of poem-making for me. But once I find the metaphor, usually the rest of the pieces fall into place easier.

2.  The right angle - What do I want to reveal about my poem's subject and how will I accomplish that?

3.  The right form - What form will best suit the subject matter - free verse or any number of other forms. Some of the forms I work in include the limerick, roundel, triolet, villanelle, pantoum and haiku. I also like to try  forms I haven't tried before as well as put my own spin on existing forms.

4.  The right voice - What voice will best suit my subject matter - third person or first person or even, sometimes, second person? If third person, will it be omnipotent or limited? If first person, is an object/character speaking (mask poem) or is the poet speaking to an object/character (apostrophe poem)?

5. The right word - Finally, after all these considerations, it's time to actually write the poem, time to consider each and every word, to find the best words to make the best poem. Some of my favorite word-seeking resources include Roget's Thesaurus and Rhymezone's Synonyms/Related Phrases function.

For me, much patience is needed in the creation of a poem. But the end result is well worth it! Waiting for the right metaphor, the right angle, the right form, the right voice and the right word equals satisfaction!
                             
                                 "Then I put up my feet 'cuz my poem is complete..."

I'd love to hear your thoughts on this theme. What is your poem-making process like?
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    B. J. Lee is a children’s author and poet. Her picture book, There Was an Old Gator Who Swallowed a Moth, is launching with Pelican Publishing on February 15, 2019. She has poems in 25 poetry anthologies published by  Little, Brown, Wordsong, BloomsburyUK, National Geographic, Otter-Barry Books, Pomelo Books, and Chicken Soup for the Soul. She has worked with anthologists Lee Bennett Hopkins, J. Patrick Lewis and Kenn Nesbitt. She has written poems for such children’s magazines as Spider, Highlights and The School Magazine. Follow her on Twitter @bjlee_writer.

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