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I enjoy writing in forms and learning about forms and have written several ballads. The ballad is defined as:
“a form that comes in four-line verses, usually alternating between four and three beats to [the] line. The word comes from ballare, the Italian for “to dance’ (same root as ballet, ballerina and ball). ~ Stephen Fry, “The Ode Less Travelled.”
Another important aspect of the ballad is that it tells a story.
This one is about my naughty toy poodle, Lulu, may she rest in peace.
I enjoy writing in forms and learning about forms and have written several ballads. The ballad is defined as:
“a form that comes in four-line verses, usually alternating between four and three beats to [the] line. The word comes from ballare, the Italian for “to dance’ (same root as ballet, ballerina and ball). ~ Stephen Fry, “The Ode Less Travelled.”
Another important aspect of the ballad is that it tells a story.
This one is about my naughty toy poodle, Lulu, may she rest in peace.
The Ballad of the Naughty Poodle
By B.J. Lee
I’ll tell you a story of a dog in her glory--
the naughty toy poodle named Lulu.
But first let me say, do not get in her way
or she may put one over on you too.
Although she’s petite and may strike you as sweet,
believe me, her mind’s always cooking
up schemes to sneak by and eat my potpie
the minute she sees I’m not looking.
I tell her to stay but she does not obey
and makes her way down floor by floor.
She shreds paper towels with claws like an owl’s.
When spotted, she speeds out the door.
She’ll stretch and she’ll yawn but then once I am gone,
Lulu tips over the trash.
On the floor I find mustard mixed in with the custard.
It’s clear she’s been having a bash!
She lands with a leap in the composting heap
no matter how loudly I yell.
I shout, “You're in trouble, come here on the double.”
I hold my nose--wow--does she smell!
I give her a scrub in the claw-footed tub.
She splashes the suds in my face.
When I grab for a towel, she lets out a howl
and runs away like it’s a race.
Yes, this small, dirty dog redefines the word ‘hog.’
She’s always escaping my clutches.
And as hard as I try, the house is a sty--
just some of the little swine’s touches.
© 2010 B.J. Lee All Rights Reserved
First published in “Umbrella Journal’s Bumbershoot Annual” August, 2010
By B.J. Lee
I’ll tell you a story of a dog in her glory--
the naughty toy poodle named Lulu.
But first let me say, do not get in her way
or she may put one over on you too.
Although she’s petite and may strike you as sweet,
believe me, her mind’s always cooking
up schemes to sneak by and eat my potpie
the minute she sees I’m not looking.
I tell her to stay but she does not obey
and makes her way down floor by floor.
She shreds paper towels with claws like an owl’s.
When spotted, she speeds out the door.
She’ll stretch and she’ll yawn but then once I am gone,
Lulu tips over the trash.
On the floor I find mustard mixed in with the custard.
It’s clear she’s been having a bash!
She lands with a leap in the composting heap
no matter how loudly I yell.
I shout, “You're in trouble, come here on the double.”
I hold my nose--wow--does she smell!
I give her a scrub in the claw-footed tub.
She splashes the suds in my face.
When I grab for a towel, she lets out a howl
and runs away like it’s a race.
Yes, this small, dirty dog redefines the word ‘hog.’
She’s always escaping my clutches.
And as hard as I try, the house is a sty--
just some of the little swine’s touches.
© 2010 B.J. Lee All Rights Reserved
First published in “Umbrella Journal’s Bumbershoot Annual” August, 2010
Here's the little stinker. She looks all innocent, but she is definitely thinking her Machiavellian thoughts and plotting her next dastardly scheme!
The ballad comes to us from song and folk traditions and many, many popular songs are ballads. Here is the first stanza from “The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald” by Gordon Lightfoot:
The legend lives on from the Chippewa on down
Of the big lake they called “Gitche Gumme.”
The lake, it is said, never gives up her dead
When the skies of November turn gloomy.
Read the rest of the poem here
© 1976 by Gordon Lightfoot
photo courtesy of NOAA
Typically a ballad will rhyme either abab or abcb if it is in quatrains. Gordon has chosen the latter and so have I.
Some books and websites define ballads as being typically written in iambic meter
daDUMdaDUMdaDUMdaDUM
daDUMdaDUMdaDUM
but Gordon broke that rule, giving us anapestic meter:
dadaDUMdadaDUMdadaDUMdaDUMda (with an extra syllable at the end— a feminine ending)
My poem, above, is also written in anapestic meter (with some feminine endings as well as internal rhyme).
I have also seen ballads arranged in sestets (6 lines to a stanza) . A good example is ”The Walrus and the Carpenter” by Lewis Carrol (this one is iambic):
The Walrus and the Carpenter
were walking close at hand.
They wept like anything to see
such quantities of sand:
“If this were only cleared away,”
they said, “it would be grand.”
Read the rest of the poem here
And, I have seen ballads written with seven beats to the line, although arguably, each line could be broken down into two lines of four and then three beats. Here is a stanza from Robert Service’s “The Shooting of Dan McGrew” (anapestic):
A bunch of the boys were whooping it up in the Malamute saloon;
The kid that handles the music-box was hitting a jag-time tune;
Back of the bar, in a solo game, sat Dangerous Dan McGrew,
And watching his luck was his light-o'-love, the lady that's known as Lou.
Read the rest of the poem here
No matter what decision you make regarding format and meter, ballads are a fun choice if you wish to tell a story in your poem!
Some books and websites define ballads as being typically written in iambic meter
daDUMdaDUMdaDUMdaDUM
daDUMdaDUMdaDUM
but Gordon broke that rule, giving us anapestic meter:
dadaDUMdadaDUMdadaDUMdaDUMda (with an extra syllable at the end— a feminine ending)
My poem, above, is also written in anapestic meter (with some feminine endings as well as internal rhyme).
I have also seen ballads arranged in sestets (6 lines to a stanza) . A good example is ”The Walrus and the Carpenter” by Lewis Carrol (this one is iambic):
The Walrus and the Carpenter
were walking close at hand.
They wept like anything to see
such quantities of sand:
“If this were only cleared away,”
they said, “it would be grand.”
Read the rest of the poem here
And, I have seen ballads written with seven beats to the line, although arguably, each line could be broken down into two lines of four and then three beats. Here is a stanza from Robert Service’s “The Shooting of Dan McGrew” (anapestic):
A bunch of the boys were whooping it up in the Malamute saloon;
The kid that handles the music-box was hitting a jag-time tune;
Back of the bar, in a solo game, sat Dangerous Dan McGrew,
And watching his luck was his light-o'-love, the lady that's known as Lou.
Read the rest of the poem here
No matter what decision you make regarding format and meter, ballads are a fun choice if you wish to tell a story in your poem!
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